miércoles, 7 de enero de 2015

Problem-Solution essay: Corruption

Outline topic: Corruption in politicians is increasing.

Problem: Corruption in politicians is increasing.
Solution A: Unemplying politicians.
Solution B: Make them returning all the money.
Arguments against A and B: Politicians are corrupt since a long time ago. They don't go to return the money in any case, because they would give away them.
Solution C: Going to jail.
Arguments against/for C + conclusion:

Corruption is a really important problem since a very long time ago. Politicians steal our money and nobody do nothing. They still stealing it for their better life meanwhile we live in poberty. However, if they come to jail, we go straight on being ''poor'' and any Robin Hood is going to return us our money because they have it in private bank accounts in Switzeland. They prefer going to jail because with a good behaviour, they will leave the jail, and then, they will have again all their stolen money.

Nowadays jails are very luxurious places for famous people. Those famous people who go to prison enjoy a very smart room, with TV, radiostation, bathroom... Jail is like a hotel for them.  But, if they had to live with the other prisoners, all would change for them. Prisoners have a lot of fury and they would make the politician have a very hard life in prison because of the fights. Prisoners are very angry an they would hurt politicians with violence and feeling their physical discomfort due to their situation. And then, they would learn about the 7th commandment: ''You shall not steal''

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