I did this problem/solution paragraph one day in class. This was my fist problem/solution paragraph.
Topic: Nowadays margination.
Problem: Nowadays at schools, a lot of people marginarice others.
Solution A: At schools we should give a talk to the children and do something to prevent this kind of psycological injures.
Arguments against A: However these children don't mind if they are hurting to another because they are very cruel.
Solution B: It should exist a type of convivence such as a blind date to meet the marginate children in a sentimentaly way and not by their faces.
Argument against B: The majority of children wouldn't want to do it, because they do not want to fight with their own defects.
Solution C: They should prove their own medicine and be punished by others to feel the pain that they cause.
Conclusion: People would be happier and tolerant with others. In special, children.
miércoles, 7 de enero de 2015
Write an outline for an essay.
This outline is a compulsory practice which I did in class. It is about Whatsapp and their facility to destroy couples.
Whatsapp can destroy many reationships:
1. Jealously.
a) You always want to know what is he/she doing in every single moment.
b) With this app, you always want to know with who is your boyfriend/girlfriend chatting to.
2. Insecurity.
a) If he/she is a lot of time online and you see it (because with this app you can see when people are conected by internet) and he/she doesn't talk to you, you possibly start thinking: With who is he/she talking to? Is he/she more important than me?
b) With this application you can delete all you conversations and photos with any trace. And you can feeling insecure about your partner.
3. Controlling your partner. (Double blue tick on Whatsapp)
a) You can see if he/she has see you message and if he/she has ignored you.
b)You can get crazy because of this ignorance and why he/she did it.
Conclusion: When you can controle your partner, the things that he/she does, her/his connction, his/her contacts... You can start feeling insecure, jeloux, irritated... And with the latest app's renovation, you can know when he/she has read you messages. I am sure that this is going to destroy many relationships.
Whatsapp can destroy many reationships:
1. Jealously.
a) You always want to know what is he/she doing in every single moment.
b) With this app, you always want to know with who is your boyfriend/girlfriend chatting to.
2. Insecurity.
a) If he/she is a lot of time online and you see it (because with this app you can see when people are conected by internet) and he/she doesn't talk to you, you possibly start thinking: With who is he/she talking to? Is he/she more important than me?
b) With this application you can delete all you conversations and photos with any trace. And you can feeling insecure about your partner.
3. Controlling your partner. (Double blue tick on Whatsapp)
a) You can see if he/she has see you message and if he/she has ignored you.
b)You can get crazy because of this ignorance and why he/she did it.
Conclusion: When you can controle your partner, the things that he/she does, her/his connction, his/her contacts... You can start feeling insecure, jeloux, irritated... And with the latest app's renovation, you can know when he/she has read you messages. I am sure that this is going to destroy many relationships.
Problem-Solution essay: Corruption
Outline topic: Corruption in politicians is increasing.
Problem: Corruption in politicians is increasing.
Solution A: Unemplying politicians.
Solution B: Make them returning all the money.
Arguments against A and B: Politicians are corrupt since a long time ago. They don't go to return the money in any case, because they would give away them.
Solution C: Going to jail.
Arguments against/for C + conclusion:
Corruption is a really important problem since a very long time ago. Politicians steal our money and nobody do nothing. They still stealing it for their better life meanwhile we live in poberty. However, if they come to jail, we go straight on being ''poor'' and any Robin Hood is going to return us our money because they have it in private bank accounts in Switzeland. They prefer going to jail because with a good behaviour, they will leave the jail, and then, they will have again all their stolen money.
Nowadays jails are very luxurious places for famous people. Those famous people who go to prison enjoy a very smart room, with TV, radiostation, bathroom... Jail is like a hotel for them. But, if they had to live with the other prisoners, all would change for them. Prisoners have a lot of fury and they would make the politician have a very hard life in prison because of the fights. Prisoners are very angry an they would hurt politicians with violence and feeling their physical discomfort due to their situation. And then, they would learn about the 7th commandment: ''You shall not steal''
martes, 6 de enero de 2015
My bestfriend is a phone.
New technologies are available for everyone who want to have it. But it is taking our live little by little. We don't speak with our mother or father face to face, We text them even for what we want to have lunch. When we go out with our friends we spend all our time sharing photos or coments in Twitter, Facebook or Instagram, but the reality is that we are alone with our new bestfriend. Our phone.
DREAMCATCHERS
We live in the age of the constructive critiques and people have told to us that we have to accept them. We live in the age of the every opinion is important, but there isn't.
To conclude this opinion point, there is a phrase that I want to re-mark: ''the opinions are like a booty, everybody has one'' and we believed that the other people booties suck. Maybe this phrase is not the smartest, but it perfectly explains this situation.
I live in a preocupation condition, and I have decided to share it with you. Since early times, humans have wanted to touch it all, even booties. Now, humans want touch dreams too. And, then, they created alcohol and dramcatchers. On the one hand, with alcohol they could touch booties without any preocupation, and in the other, they created dreamcatchers fot catching dreams that the couln't make come true.
But, Ladies and Gentleman, we can't catch dreams. We only can dream horrible or beatiful things, and with luck, we can make them come true. We can't keep them into a box. Okay? We have bad and good dreams but we can't save them. There are a lot of people, some are worse than a nightmare and no-one follow them with two little sticks and a feather trying to catch the forever.
We are getting confuse, very very confuse. There are things that we can't taste or smell and it is alright. It is not mean that they don't exist, they do it because we talk about them and this is the real clue of their existence. I don't know in which moment we decided to chase those things; in which moment we decided putting a name to everything, that we had to touch it all, or put it under a loupe in which moment we decided that we had to change everthing.
In my childhood I was able to believe that a stick was a sword and a rock was a phone. I did spoons with a little stick and a green leaf and I was happy. I didn't understand why I did this, but I enjoyed with it and I didn't question myself about everything my friends or I did.
This is all.
viernes, 14 de noviembre de 2014
My song-writers
I woke up in the morning and I saw all my books, my pens, files... In the past on my desk you only could see stories or dolls... And now, I know how happy I was in my childhood... How many fits of laughter I had, how many trips...
I remember when I asked to my parents: where become babies? and they answered this: you are the end of a song, your father wrote it and your mother sang it. How stupid! But I was happy with this explanation.
And now, I know how magical was my childhood... Sometimes I watch all the videos that my dad recorded to me. On the beach, in Disneyland, trying to catch the moon... And I know that my hildhood's happiness has travellled more than me, will be reproduced when I am not...
My house was my bed, my refuge... and my parents were my angels. They were always taking care of me, giving me eagerness... They gave me the hugest wings that I could have. They always have put sugar into my life, risking their lives if it was necessary...
My parents are all my life, and now, if I could, I would want give them the same happiness that they donated to me all their life.
I remember when I asked to my parents: where become babies? and they answered this: you are the end of a song, your father wrote it and your mother sang it. How stupid! But I was happy with this explanation.
And now, I know how magical was my childhood... Sometimes I watch all the videos that my dad recorded to me. On the beach, in Disneyland, trying to catch the moon... And I know that my hildhood's happiness has travellled more than me, will be reproduced when I am not...
My house was my bed, my refuge... and my parents were my angels. They were always taking care of me, giving me eagerness... They gave me the hugest wings that I could have. They always have put sugar into my life, risking their lives if it was necessary...
My parents are all my life, and now, if I could, I would want give them the same happiness that they donated to me all their life.
domingo, 9 de noviembre de 2014
Opinion Paragraph: being alone is the key sometimes,
A lot of people prefer being surrounded by people, but I like being alone sometimes. I can think and relax without anyone annoying me. I usually listen to music and think of my childhood, my old friends... How happy I was in the past, and I sometimes, when I think about my grandfather and his beautiful way of thinking, I cry. ''Crying is a good way to purify your soul'' he always said.
However people prefer being accompained by others. They think that they don't need to be alone, but it is a big error. If you aren't alone sometimes, you can explode and get angry for something. Taking your time alone, you can burst into tears if you want, and then, you can go out with your friends without thinking about your problems.
Thus, one advice is that you are alone ten or fifteen minutes everyday; think about all your life, turn on your radio and dance, sing, cry! Everything you want. Being alone for a while can help you purify your soul, so that you can be happier than before
However people prefer being accompained by others. They think that they don't need to be alone, but it is a big error. If you aren't alone sometimes, you can explode and get angry for something. Taking your time alone, you can burst into tears if you want, and then, you can go out with your friends without thinking about your problems.
Thus, one advice is that you are alone ten or fifteen minutes everyday; think about all your life, turn on your radio and dance, sing, cry! Everything you want. Being alone for a while can help you purify your soul, so that you can be happier than before
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